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Through the Window, 2:30 PM

An acrostic written for the "Dancing with Distraction" challenge, inspired by my school days.

By Suze KayPublished 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Second Place in Dancing with Distraction Challenge
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Through the Window, 2:30 PM
Photo by Anna Mould on Unsplash

Did you find what you were looking for

In the

Sway of the

Trees? Or did you simply

Recover your senses,

Allow the

Curling balloon strands of

Thought to recoil

Into the snug corners

Of your mind?

No is a complete answer.

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Suze Kay

Pastry chef by day, insomniac writer by night.

Catch me here for spooky stories, crushable poems, and overall weird thoughts.

Or, let me catch you on my website!

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  • Ahna Lewis3 months ago

    I love the image you paint! This was excellent!

  • MecAsaf3 months ago

    Excellent work

  • Chloe Gilholy5 months ago

    Well deserved placing. Gorgous work.

  • Wow I loved this. A very intriguing thought provoking piece. Congrats on your win very well deserved

  • Kristen Balyeat5 months ago

    Such a wonderful poemโ€“ an experience to read with a brilliant finish. Loved it and so happy to see it as a winning piece! Congrats!

  • Mackenzie Davis5 months ago

    I love that last line, as thought the speaker is annoyed and judging the โ€œyouโ€ for being distracted. Yet the overall effect is quite a surreal beauty. Well done! And congratulations on second place! ๐ŸŽŠ

  • Darla M Seely5 months ago

    Congrats on second place!

  • Rachel M.J5 months ago

    Chills, 'no is a complete answer'.

  • Test5 months ago

    Congrats on your win, Suze. This is simply gorgeous. โค๏ธ

  • Lamar Wiggins5 months ago

    Wow! I love this entry and see why it was recognized. Congrats on placing in the challenge. ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿฅ‡๐Ÿฅณ

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Simplicity seems to be the order of the day. Simple words which convey so very much. Congrats on your win.

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago

    Congratulations!!!

  • Awesome โœจ ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ˜‰Congratulations๐ŸŽ‰

  • Superb. This is such a deserving winner. Congratulations!

  • Ava Mack5 months ago

    Beautiful, Suze! Congrats on this stunning poem and your win!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    Wonderful piece. Congrats

  • Melissa Ingoldsby5 months ago

    A very deep breath and it feels like it hit a plaintive note thatโ€™s hard to swallow. A truly poignant experience here๐Ÿ’“well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ…congratulations ๐ŸŽ‰

  • Caroline Jane5 months ago

    Congratulations. Tremendous last line!! โค

  • Aphotic6 months ago

    I love that last line. No is a complete answer, no need for explanation to follow or overthinking. โ€œCurling balloon strands of thoughtโ€ is a gorgeous turn of phrase.

  • A. Lenae6 months ago

    Really enjoy this. Your writing style is like listening to a favorite song and finding new components and sounds to it each time it plays. This is a great piece!

  • Kendall Defoe 6 months ago

    Excellent!

  • MARIE ODEMS 6 months ago

    GREAT WORK !!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT .....

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