Thoughts on a tornado
I could hear her wrath, her bellowing might roaring beyond the horizon!
Who dreams up ways to wreak destruction
Upon our frail and mortal souls
Be it God, the Universe or Mother Nature
Are we but visitors on a planet that just naturally exists
Where phenomenons are a daily routine occurrence
Which disregards our trespass here
Thus tossing us along as mountains roar, thunder clashes
Storms funnel, twirl and lay waste to anything in its path
For first I perceived you
Then I tasted your approach upon the troubled wind
Mother nature; enraged, caressed my senses
Ere I knew what you could possibly be
The PA system screamed frantically to the aroused air
Jolting us savagely from our serene yet hurried reverie
Thus being unhappily apprised of the devastation yet to come
I comprehended and realized your fervor in the sandflakes
Which somehow arrived as forewarning upon the air
Sandpapered grains of dust flew to lips and nostrils
Taste me, smell me! they shouted disdainfully
Taste deeply of that which is yet to come
I waited with bated breath, hoping for change upon the wind
That's when I saw you
Way over yonder, beyond the fields, approaching as if in slow motion
A deadly movie being watched upon an unreal screen
I squinted my eyes to see you
From earth to sky you spiraled and funneled
Closer, closer you drew to unwelcome terror and fear
We hid as best we could
We cowered amidst tears, prayers and supplication
Supplication and hope for mercy
Falling from lips which in time past denied the existence
Of an unseen yet caring God
The lips and hearts which now call upon this God
To spare our miserable lives so we can live to believe
And so become better versions of ourselves
Swear allegiance to goodness and piety in time to come
Still advancing, you barreled onwards
Without care for the hypocrite buried deep within our lying lips
For we long ago had lost our faith in higher entities
Whom we had from time begun, called upon for help and aid
Help us, save us. There was no answer forthcoming
Caring not for the destruction and loss of life
No help, no celestial intervention came nigh
In the near distance, I heard your dissonant bellow
Like wind trapped within a ghostly well, deep, deep
Within the fiery depths of Hell
From which there was no escape
You descended upon us
With all the might of an enraged Heaven and Hell combined
We could not then deny your touch
As fire, rain, wind and terrible force consumed the land
Like a freight train you barreled into our lives
Ripping the roofs off the tops of our puny houses
Uprooting trees, flattening the beauty that once was
Animals, cattle, cars, trucks, everything paid a precious price
As people, things and landscape vanished within
Your angry, boiling, torrid and fearsome might
We cowered, we prayed, we cursed and we asked 'why us'
We waited, seemed like an eternity
Then; slowly, the sounds began to fade
As you moved to more fertile grounds of fresh destruction
We waited, then
Slowly we emerged from our various hiding places
Like butterflies emerging from their uncertain cocoons
Tears of happiness for life we shed, tears of grief for the loss
Scattered upon a landscape of broken hopes and dreams
The smell upon the air changed to a soft sulfurous blend
As you raged and roared, leaving broken hearts in your wake
Rising, rising with your treasure trove of gathered trophies
Spitting them out here, there and everywhere, still you raged
Still you shrieked, screamed, roared and howled
Upon the open field, we heard sounds akin to a waterfall
How could devastation sound so much like a lovely thing
We heard you
While you were crushing our hopes and dreams
Upon the blackened bodies of your victims, sulfur magnified
After the storm had passed, the air you saturated with ozone
To such a degree that even the small, the young, noticed it's stink
You were aptly compared to the odor
Of burning brimstone and burning matchsticks of hellfire
Upon our knees we fell
Those who were prayerful, prayed, some howled in pain
Others vociferated and cursed
Still others dug through the rubble for signs of life
As you again departed beyond the horizon
We knew that we would bury our dead and rebuild
Some would stubbornly remain and defy the odds
Some would opt for greener pastures
Others would continue the fight in their own unique ways
Are we not made in the image of God, we ask
Why then do we suffer such atrocities beyond that which we can bear
Tis an age old question
I have not the answer
Life continues beyond hurt and pain
Beyond the broken hearts and wanton waste
Be strong, survive and persevere
Life hurts, but
Still there is beauty in every aspect of our existence
Even in the conceived derailment of our innate senses
Seek the truth and beauty in everything.
About the Creator
Novel Allen
Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky. ~~ Rabindranath Tagore~~
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That was so amazing and I loved how you underlined each sensory experience. That definitely made them stand out really well! ππ
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