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The Thompsons’ Tree

T Tautogram

By Donna ReneePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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The Tilting Tree- taken today

The Thompsons’ tall tree tilts terribly….

Tantalizingly.

Ticktockticktock…

Too tilty?

Troublesome??

Tree to topple???

Thoroughly thinking that today…

…time to tinker?

Tell the Thompsons??

Totally.

Traversed terrain.

Told them.

They thanked.

Trust them their two twin toddlers to tell.

Then… threatening thunderstorms!

Torque twists tree trunk!

Terror!!

Trembling!!!

T I M B E R!!!!

Terrible travesty…

Tree tumbled, took the Thompsons’ twins’ treasured trampoline.

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About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.

Work in Progress: WOWH, cozy mystery (paranormal elements)

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  • Test8 months ago

    "Fantastic! Occasionally, the best inspiration for writing comes from real-life experiences. Well done!"

  • Monnie M. 8 months ago

    Amazing.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Fantastic stuff, Donna and I loved the use of the actual image and that you clearly based it on reality. Love finding inspiration from around us! Well done, one of the Queens of Tautograms.

  • Alena Caranovaabout a year ago

    I love the picture you have with this. Like it’s HAPPENING right now. AHHHH! 😂🤣 Love your work and the way you flow with such light hearted humor. Reading your work is a real treat.

  • Stephen Kramer Avitabileabout a year ago

    Oh no! The main character did all they could (and even with only T words, impressive) but I am glad it was only the twins trampoline and not the twins themselves. This was a fun one!

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    How do you keep doing that? It takes a very clever mind to keep putting together these tautograms of yours that make perfect sense. I'm flabbergasted yet again!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I love how you were able to make this flow just like a story! Sorry about the tree though, lol. Wonderful work!!

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Fascinating story within a story. Totally loved it, truly terrible. :)

  • Testabout a year ago

    Loved this! Incredibly well done, Donna 💕🙂

  • Samia Afraabout a year ago

    So fun. Great job. Great flow and imagery.

  • Gosh you make it seem so easy! I loved the smooth flow of it and the story it told! Brilliant!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    “Thoroughly thinking that today!”. So good. Great job! 😊

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Terrible tragedy, terrific tautogram! 🤣

  • JBazabout a year ago

    This was great, Totally telling this tale told to tremendous titillating triumph.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh my! You are amazing at these! I loved this so much!! 😍😍

  • Vivian R McInernyabout a year ago

    So glad it didn't smite the twins. Well done!

  • Another home run! Not just having fun playing with sounds & words but with an interesting "tale to tell" as well.

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    I love that even the photo caption was written with T's! Great job with this one!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done. Too bad about the trampoline.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Terrific, tremulously tongue-twisting - Anneliese

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Sometimes real life gives us the best ideas for writing. Great job!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Ha! Loved this! Obviously not the squashed trampoline!

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    I like that this one tells a story - A true story from what you shared on V+A. Well done!

  • Abby Kay Mendoncaabout a year ago

    Not the trampoline! 😱

  • Kelly Robertsonabout a year ago

    Wow this one is great! Glad everyone's OK though.

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