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Desolation Drift

D tautogram

By Donna ReneePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Desolation Drift
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Decades drifting,

Disparate dreams,

Devotion diluted…?

Discomfiture…

Definitely deluded.

Desperation delivers distinctly daunting dilemmas!

Dissolution?

Divorce??

~

Devastation.

~

Distress directly dictates depths down depression dives…

Demoralizing despair deluges.

disappearing…

darkness…

dread…

desolation.

~

Dispensation?

Dear’s delicate deeds, demonstrations deal despondency deliverance,

Delightful, decadent daylight dawns!

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About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.

Work in Progress: WOWH, cozy mystery (paranormal elements)

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  • Test7 months ago

    Outstanding! I thoroughly enjoyed 'despondency deliverance,' and the entire piece was absolutely fantastic from beginning to end. Donna, your mastery of tautograms is truly impressive. Great work!💓😍🙌👌👍

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    So happy that the last line negated all the negatives, and set one upon a road to hope. Really real words here.

  • Rachel Moralesabout a year ago

    💯❤️Admiration my friend 📝👍

  • Brannan K.about a year ago

    One of the few tautograms that I have read so far that don't just seem like a mess of scrabble words jotted down. Good job on delivering difficult emotions here.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    A lot of awesome storytelling going on here along with your delicious d word gymnastics! Fantastic, Donna! Did Donna do "D"? Definitely, Donna did!

  • Abby Kay Mendoncaabout a year ago

    Woah, my D tautogram has a very similar meaning. Still, loved this:)

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    The first line, "Decades drifting" was sobering. I love this one. Time for an extra heart. 💖

  • Testabout a year ago

    Great word choices! I wonder what you could do with an entire alphabet!! - Anneliese🧡

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Did not see that coming. Nicely done Donna, (except you didn't sneak your own name in there anywhere!)

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I loved 'despondency deliverance' but this whole thing was fantastic, start to finish. You are really nailing these tautograms, my friend!!

  • Diani Alvarengaabout a year ago

    This is beautifully written! ❤️

  • Samia Afraabout a year ago

    Liked "diluted, deluded" word choice and word play. You are very gifted at these tautograms.

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    powerful and emotive piece of writing that skillfully captures the complexity of human emotion.💖💗❣️

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Delightful, Donna! … seriously though, great writing. Have a great night!

  • R.C. Taylorabout a year ago

    Wonderfully done!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Definitely, delightful!!! 💖💕

  • Donna Fox (HKB)about a year ago

    What a Devastating picture you paint! Such a passion filled piece, well done!

  • Kristen Balyeatabout a year ago

    Great job, Donna- Very emotional piece! You are great at telling a story with these wild tautograms!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Very good!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Donna, this is fantastic! So moving and poignant. Absolutely love this 💕🙂

  • Moe Radosevichabout a year ago

    Nice one 😀

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    Well done! Each line carries such emotion. An excellently crafted tautogram!

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