Decades drifting,
Disparate dreams,
Devotion diluted…?
Discomfiture…
Definitely deluded.
Desperation delivers distinctly daunting dilemmas!
Dissolution?
Divorce??
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Devastation.
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Distress directly dictates depths down depression dives…
Demoralizing despair deluges.
disappearing…
darkness…
dread…
desolation.
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Dispensation?
Dear’s delicate deeds, demonstrations deal despondency deliverance,
Delightful, decadent daylight dawns!
About the Creator
Donna Renee
Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.
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Comments (21)
So happy that the last line negated all the negatives, and set one upon a road to hope. Really real words here.
💯❤️Admiration my friend 📝👍
One of the few tautograms that I have read so far that don't just seem like a mess of scrabble words jotted down. Good job on delivering difficult emotions here.
A lot of awesome storytelling going on here along with your delicious d word gymnastics! Fantastic, Donna! Did Donna do "D"? Definitely, Donna did!
Woah, my D tautogram has a very similar meaning. Still, loved this:)
The first line, "Decades drifting" was sobering. I love this one. Time for an extra heart. 💖
Great word choices! I wonder what you could do with an entire alphabet!! - Anneliese🧡
Did not see that coming. Nicely done Donna, (except you didn't sneak your own name in there anywhere!)
I loved 'despondency deliverance' but this whole thing was fantastic, start to finish. You are really nailing these tautograms, my friend!!
This is beautifully written! ❤️
Liked "diluted, deluded" word choice and word play. You are very gifted at these tautograms.
powerful and emotive piece of writing that skillfully captures the complexity of human emotion.💖💗❣️
Delightful, Donna! … seriously though, great writing. Have a great night!
Wonderfully done!
Definitely, delightful!!! 💖💕
What a Devastating picture you paint! Such a passion filled piece, well done!
Great job, Donna- Very emotional piece! You are great at telling a story with these wild tautograms!
Very good!
Donna, this is fantastic! So moving and poignant. Absolutely love this 💕🙂
Nice one 😀
Well done! Each line carries such emotion. An excellently crafted tautogram!