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The Sun is Within

In the absence of light

By Real PoeticPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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The Sun is Within
Photo by Adam Smith on Unsplash

Ethereal sky gone in a blink for those that seldom think of nature and only

coup d'œil at the universe every so often.

Love life through the shadows, and then you’ll notice the sun has been within.

Inadvertently, the hype and preparation was followed by indifference, which was no different than any other day. The news

plunged the world to the end of their

seats and influenced introverts out into the streets.

Exhilarating! ‘Til, it wasn’t. Like a Mother being celebrated ‘til the baby’s birth. Admiration for Earth and its wonders can be everyday. Not just when the Moon gets in the Sun’s way.

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Real Poetic

Welcome to my imagination. ✨

I write what I want, whenever I want.

Thanks for reading!

-R.P. ❤️

Instagram: @therealpoetic

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  • The Dani Writerabout a month ago

    Oooooooooh I love this!!! So many dope lines, but the way you ended it was fire truth: "Exhilarating! ‘Til, it wasn’t. Like a Mother being celebrated ‘til the baby’s birth. Admiration for Earth and its wonders can be everyday. Not just when the Moon gets in the Sun’s way." This poem...won ME. 😍

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Bold Brilliant and beautiful!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Donna Fox (HKB)2 months ago

    This was beautiful!! My favourite line: "Not just when the Moon gets in the Sun’s way", there's just something about it that gives the whole piece and occurrence in general this whimsical feel. As though eclipses are nothing more than a happy coincidence, which I guess they are... I just appreciate the vibe this line puts out!!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Oh wow. This is excellent, and there's so much truth in that last line. Well done

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    ‘Admiration for the earth and its wonders could be everyday’ So true! Reminds me how I want to see Niagra Falls. 💖

  • Gosh this was so breathtakingly beautiful! Loved your poem!

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    RP! This...is...awesome. Just...love the idea and concept and the way you have executed it and coup d'œil is a phrase I'd never heard of before, so you made me Google! Well done!

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    So Flyy! Awesome work RPeezy! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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