The Seamstress's Shop: a sestina poem
Ekphrastic Challenge August 2023
This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for August 2023 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
The image that this poem was specifically written about can be found here. (August 2023 – Lily Prigioniero’s “Seamstress”)
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The Seamstress’s Shop: a sestina poem
The seamstress in her sewing shop, beams of light
Strike her face, air floats, sitting by the open window
Thread tugged, bobbin spins, machine tapping
Needle punches, thread pulled, back and forth weaving
Time-worn hands scrunching up the cloth
Pushed through machine by expert fingers
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Fabric turned, needle stabs, narrowly missing fingers
Tired eyes squint through glasses, dust floats in the light
Seam re-adjusted, re-pinned, folded cloth
Gray hair tussled by breeze from open window
Thread taut, thread snap, empty needle weaving
Foot off pedal as machine stops tapping
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Seam-ripper pulls out thread as foot tapping
On the floor, waiting for the pedal, fingers
Pluck out broken strands, thread un-weaving
Concentration on her face, illuminated by the light
Hear the bustle of the city through the window
Thread tied, pins set, ready made the cloth
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Foot down on pedal, gather up the cloth
Needle flies, jabbing down, spool of thread tapping
Refreshing air sharpens mind, breezy from the window
A careful dance of hands across the fabric, fingers
Move in, move out, needle gleaming in the light
Needle darts in, darts out, thread and needle weaving
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Tucks folded, pleats falling, making seams weaving
Fabric taking shape, comes to life the cloth
Pile of buttons sit on desk, glinting in the light
Dial clicks, needle crisscross, needle tapping
As it hits fabric, button held in place by fingers
Fabric flutters in breeze that floats through window
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Finished wedding dress held up to window
Beads and sequins swirled, gossamer thread weaving
Seamstress smiles, gentle loving touch of fingers
Flowing fabric, delicate lace, smooth silk cloth
Knocking on the door, knuckles tapping
Sheer sequins sparkle in the light
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Dress dazzles in the light; beads shine like glass in window
Music plays, feet tapping; people dancing, memories weaving
Bride spins and twirls cloth; groom turns her, holding fingers
Submitted under MRB
A sestina is a type of poem that utilizes six un-rhymed stanzas with six lines each. The words that end each line of the first stanza are the same six words that end the lines in all the stanzas throughout the poem. These six words are then recycled throughout the poem in a specific rolling pattern. The sestina ends with a three line stanza which uses all six end-line words in a novel pattern. I find the sestina a fun form of poetry to write as you select six words that are integral to the telling of your story. You then twist and weave the lines to fit those six words. Even though it is not rhymed, the same six words give the poem a rhythmic feel.
For more information on how to write a sestina, or many other different forms of poetry, I recommend the following book: The Teachers & Writer Handbook of Poetic Forms, edited by Ron Padget, and published by Teachers & Writers Collaborative.
About the Creator
Rae Fairchild (MRB)
I love to write; putting pen to paper fills my heart and calms my soul!
Rae Fairchild is my pen name. (Because why not? Pseudonyms are cool!)
I do publish elsewhere under my real name, Mary Rae Butler. (Fairchild, an old family surname.)
Comments (3)
Love all the beautiful images!
This was so creative and I especially loved the wonderful ending!
Beautifully written!!@ Love this!!!♥️♥️💕