This poem, The Saving, is about saving humanity from itself. In days of global warming, environmental stresses and struggling economies I likened the effort to the days before Noah's act of kindness. I thought it would be a good reflection of life.
The Saving
To be of sanguine shine
For no sheep, bird and swine
An inner waking for a shepherd
Fails off all calamity
Curtains a tempered breeze
A hallowed sport
Stopped firm in race
Humanity cries in bitter disgrace
For the attack of the innocent
The purpose never to fall from grace
To keep a smile always
Give thanks to the very air for breath to match
To share, to brighten, to cleanse the winds
The earth, the dust, the measured how
In each step we take
Harnessed and sorting with the human race
The waters so begin, oh, cherished ship
The crippling artifacts of time
The trembling, crawling, fate behind
Yeah, bring the cherished stock
For us humbled, gracious, living flock
Those redeemed in acts of kindness
Unfettered under errors blasphemous
That corner all despair
So leave that there
New life awaits
Harpsichord will know the time
Feathered wake acknowledged then in sink or swim
On your own course
For mine is bitter haste
In crippling fear
That may forsake the moment
While future harnesses marbles of truth
To throw at the doors
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This is the poem that I entered into the Oxford Poetry Prize. I didn't get in but I thought this baby worth publishing so here it is. Poetry Prizes are an excellent way to get your work acknowledged and an advance to publishing. In some areas being included in a poetry literary journal is necessary to get a publishing book contract and also an advantage because it is one genre where a literary agent is not always required. Traditional publishing is a long route of patience as most of us know. That's ok with me. Some work I have saved for traditional publishing and some for indie. To date, I have 189 poems published in four books with approximately another hundred in the waiting. One in a literary journal, Highland Park Press; one in Realistic Poetry Magazine and three were contest wins for Library of Congress edition for World Poetry Movement call for entries, ten years ago when I first started writing poetry.
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Comments (7)
Very Powerful! Lovely work!
I'm so sorry this didn't get in 🥺 It was so beautifully written!
The last line makes me think of an old song I first heard on SNL, paraphrased for the occasion here: "Someone's throwin' marbles at the door, sometimes hittin' the bell. Do me a favor, open the door & let 'em in." Beautiful poem. Thanks for the advice.
Great piece! Very beautiful! Can’t wait to see more!
This is a beautiful piece. Nicely done.
Beautiful. Wonderfully written. With much depth and care.
Great piece ❤️💯👌📝im glad to see you published on here-✌️💭😉