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The Past

Series: Fragments of my mind

By CyrusPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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2 March 2022, After midnight

The past

Can’t change who you are.

They mock; they shout

They tell you that

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You!

***

Can’t change who you are.

Born with all those scars;

Born with all those marks

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Yet you

***

Don’t listen.

Just quicken the pace

And drown out the craze

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And you

***

Can change.

Just find your way

Get out of the maze.

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Yet I

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Still wonder

If I found my way through

After all these years

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As I

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Still feel

The past;

It lingers in my blood.

o

u

r

***

~ End? ~

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About the Creator

Cyrus

Welcome to the fragments of my mind. Thoughts. Ideas. All once a chaotic yet artistic mess, before I expanded them into entire, complete poems.

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  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a month ago

    CONGRATS ON YOUR TOP STORY!

  • Trishawn Blakeabout a month ago

    Cool poem Cyrus ❤️❤️ - Keep up the great work!

  • Anna about a month ago

    Wow, incredible poem! Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Idogho Oghaleabout a month ago

    I like how this beautifully captures the resilience and determination to overcome the past. It's inspiring how it emphasizes the power to change despite scars and marks.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Carol Townendabout a month ago

    I can relate in a very heartful way. Remember, your past does not make you a bad person. I love the expression of feelings that you have used in your poem.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Powerful piece. Congrats on the TS.

  • Whoaaa, this was so freaking powerful! I loved your poem!

  • Very well done and clever piece. Excellent work as always!

  • Marvelously introspective, rebellious & evocative. Your blending of "my", "your", & "our" is powerful.

  • Daphsam2 months ago

    Wow, this was very powerful to read.

  • Celia in Underland2 months ago

    Very cleverly written and like the optimism of the first half and the contemplation of self and the past it leads into 🤍

  • Cyrus (Author)2 months ago

    Writer's Notes: The "O" "U" and "R" are supposed to be lined up beneath "Y" in the original variation.

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