The night was still, the moon aglow
My heart was singing, a sweet, sweet flow
But then came the words, that cut me so
A love so deep, now laid low
Each word like a knife, cut me deep
My heart shattered, into a million pieces it did seep
The pain so sharp, I could hardly breathe
My soul in agony, it did weep
The memories so sweet, now turned so bitter
My heart torn apart, by a love so glitter
The moments so pure, now felt like a litter
My soul shattered, by a love so littered
The dreams we had, now lay shattered
My heart so heavy, with a love so battered
The moments so pure, now felt so tattered
My soul weeping, with a love now shattered
The tears fell like rain, from my eyes so blue
My heart in pieces, a love so true
The pain so raw, it cut me through
My soul now empty, a love so true
The night was still, the moon aglow
My heart now broken, with a love so low
The pain so raw, it cut me so
My soul now empty, with a love so slow
About the Creator
In Eclipse Challenge Winners
Creator Dane BH is one of our Vocal stalwarts. We’re so grateful to all of your in our Vocal community, and so thrilled by your achievements. This is the third time Dane has won one of our challenges, and she appears too on our Vocal podcast, Write Here, Write Now — take a listen if you haven’t already. But she’s not our winner because we know her: the subtlety and simplicity of we watched the world go dark. together. is what made it our winner of the In Eclipse challenge, with the grace and ease of its lines and observation. As it happens it also expresses the community spirit that means so much to us.
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