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The Old Man and the Little Girl

Time for a Change

By Cathy holmesPublished 2 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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photo by Daiga Ellaby on Unsplash

The old man slumps in his rocking chair,

his once white coat now a lusterless grey.

It's tattered and worn as the muddied lines on his face;

dulled by time, weathered and pale

as his colourless eyes that once sparkled a starry twinkle.

He remembers his youth.

He smiles with recollection of a time when the world was bright and pure.

He dreams of past days

when children giggled happily in his presence;

and adults, busying themselves in the time,

stopped to look in awe upon his beauty.

He was loved. He was wanted.

But he has worn out his welcome.

The new girl in the neighbourhood,

it is she, who is wanted now.

He watches as she dances on the lawn,

her flowing dress covering the once parched grasses

with vibrant greens and fluffy yellows.

Her floral ribbons cast scents of sweetness and musk.

An invisible bouquet floats in the cool air.

She sings in birdsong,

with notes of swallows and robins and orioles,

accompanied by woodpecker percussion.

She smiles with the warmth of the sun,

and every day she gives a little more.

The old man sheds a tear of melancholy

that stings like road salt on his potholed lips.

Tired now, he’s ready for a long slumber.

He smiles at the little girl on the lawn,

knowing it’s his time to rest, and her time to play.

The world has been yearning for her,

eagerly anticipating the change that comes

when she makes her long-awaited appearance.

They love her now, as they loved him then.

They want her now, as they once wanted him.

They will embrace her joyfully,

this beautiful little girl they call Spring.

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Love it as the symmetry with the seasons. Beautiful ♥️

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Lovely 🥰

  • Beautiful

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Lovely just Lovely Cathy!!!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliant & beautiful!!! Love this!!!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Beautiful!! 😍😍 Perfect timing for spring. 🥰 Love this so much!!!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Loved it! It was pleasant and reassuring!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Love, love, love! Such gorgeous imagery. Goodness you have a way with words, my friend :)

  • RBabout a year ago

    Beautiful written ❤️

  • Reminds me of the Ghost of Christmas Present in a Christmas Carol, a wonderful poem.

  • Wow just wowww. This was beautiful

  • Luke Foster2 years ago

    That’s a wonderful poem. Really enjoyed.

  • Della Lonaker2 years ago

    You have a gift, thanks for allowing us to experience your writing. Blessings..🦋

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