The Old Man and the Little Girl
Time for a Change
The old man slumps in his rocking chair,
his once white coat now a lusterless grey.
It's tattered and worn as the muddied lines on his face;
dulled by time, weathered and pale
as his colourless eyes that once sparkled a starry twinkle.
He remembers his youth.
He smiles with recollection of a time when the world was bright and pure.
He dreams of past days
when children giggled happily in his presence;
and adults, busying themselves in the time,
stopped to look in awe upon his beauty.
He was loved. He was wanted.
But he has worn out his welcome.
The new girl in the neighbourhood,
it is she, who is wanted now.
He watches as she dances on the lawn,
her flowing dress covering the once parched grasses
with vibrant greens and fluffy yellows.
Her floral ribbons cast scents of sweetness and musk.
An invisible bouquet floats in the cool air.
She sings in birdsong,
with notes of swallows and robins and orioles,
accompanied by woodpecker percussion.
She smiles with the warmth of the sun,
and every day she gives a little more.
The old man sheds a tear of melancholy
that stings like road salt on his potholed lips.
Tired now, he’s ready for a long slumber.
He smiles at the little girl on the lawn,
knowing it’s his time to rest, and her time to play.
The world has been yearning for her,
eagerly anticipating the change that comes
when she makes her long-awaited appearance.
They love her now, as they loved him then.
They want her now, as they once wanted him.
They will embrace her joyfully,
this beautiful little girl they call Spring.
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (13)
Love it as the symmetry with the seasons. Beautiful ♥️
Lovely 🥰
Beautiful
Lovely just Lovely Cathy!!!
Brilliant & beautiful!!! Love this!!!
Beautiful!! 😍😍 Perfect timing for spring. 🥰 Love this so much!!!
Loved it! It was pleasant and reassuring!
Love, love, love! Such gorgeous imagery. Goodness you have a way with words, my friend :)
Beautiful written ❤️
Reminds me of the Ghost of Christmas Present in a Christmas Carol, a wonderful poem.
Wow just wowww. This was beautiful
That’s a wonderful poem. Really enjoyed.
You have a gift, thanks for allowing us to experience your writing. Blessings..🦋