She Longs to Be His World
A love poem
Her heartbeats rise like the morning sun
Unfurling warmth throughout
Awakening senses of floral bouquets and
Ever brightening visions of love
Dew drops trickle
Scattering pulsing vibrations
On nerve endings
Planets align with the turn of a head
She sees the moon in his eyes
Tastes the milky drops of
Galaxies on his lips
Like candied heaven
Floating on a cloud
Carried on the wind
Through time and space
With him, in his dimension
Never to fall back to earth
Because she doesn’t need to
She will live with him
Soar with him forever
Beyond the constellations
Into the great unknown
She longs to be his world
She knows he is her universe
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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A Beautiful Revisit for me