With steely eyes set on her target, she draws tight her bow
She hesitates, for fear she’s not skilled enough to make the shot
Her chance is lost. The target slips away
Claimed by the apex predator
She knows she’s missed a clear chance, but she’s not concerned
For now she is content to try another day
*
She sets a trap, patient for her prey to fall
She’s in no hurry, enjoying the chase
This catch is more than willing, doesn’t put up much of a fight
She tenderizes him softly, and bathes him in her sweet marinade
Prepared with love and gentle touch
Surely a feast made in heaven
*
But soon she’s sickened as the bitter taste fills her mouth
The heart is cold and dry, the ribs charred black
No wings for soothing comfort on this beast
She gags on the rancid stench
Of gnarling teeth and razor tongue and horns that slice deep scars
While smiling through those gnarling teeth
*
They say she needs another, to feed her starving heart
But she’s done playing their useless games
She’s done trying to feed a void she doesn’t even feel
Done searching from without
Instead, finding from within
That very taste she’s been missing
*
The only sustenance she really needs
The only nutrients she longs for
Are those that fuel her soul
And they don’t come from the game
They come from her, and she knows it
She’ll never need another catch to complete her
*
Her bow goes down in a blaze of glory
Her rose coloured rifle emptied of its shells
Her traps hang in a decrepit shed
Left to rust with her wasted years of searching
She’s done
Done, with the hunt
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (4)
Whew, that was great
Wow! What a powerful metaphor wrapped in such beautiful language. This was amazing :)
awesome
Fantastic poem!