The Funeral
An extraterrestrial event.
I found your body, sad and strewn,
Around the forest at high noon.
Upon your arrival, I wept for you,
And vowed to show what humans do.
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I laid your corpse amongst the hay,
So you could feel the light of day,
On your strange skin, so soft and grey,
I dropped to my knees and began to pray.
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From where you came, I did not know,
But with care I took you, nice and slow.
Upon washing your fingers and your toes,
I saw your insides begin to glow.
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Is this a thanks from outer space?
Are you alive by some form of grace?
I took to my feet and began to pace.
Unsure what was next, I studied your face.
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Your eyes continued to remain ever closed,
Your chest wasn't beating, for this I did know.
Do alien species breathe differently than most?
This was so new to me; was it all just a hoax?
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I left your body in search of fresh flowers,
To adorn your grave site with all of my power,
It was the least I could do for a life that did matter,
To show that humanity was not left in tatters.
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I found a bed of daisies, both white and fragile,
Before throwing some lady's lace into my satchel,
Then stumbling upon a patch of wild bluebells,
I began building a bouquet from all the sweet smells.
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I wandered back to your final place of rest,
Hoping my efforts were enough for our guest,
I put some of the flowers on top of your breast,
Then placed the remainder around your round head.
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"Here lies a friend whose name is unknown,
From faraway places to Earth, they did roam.
They came in peace in a spaceship of chrome,
They are free to sleep; this planet, their final home."
About the Creator
Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.
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Comments (15)
I missed this poem! A very different and emotional slant to the challenge. I liked this one for being different! I should have read this aloud, but when I read it in my head ‘satchel’ had the greatest sound! ☺️
Omggggg, this was so emotional! I wish he wasn't dead 🥺🥺🥺
Such brilliant creativity and delivered in such an emotive way 🥹 ❤️✨
Wow I feel I might cry
how sweet and touching
If we can show compassion for pets and other animals why not show some to a more advanced species. Great concept and your writing is amazing.
Rather sweet...!
Such a cool and interesting poem, really enjoyed it
What an imagination you have!
This was masterfully put together; and beautiful in every regard. Thank you for making my day Ashley!
Oh wow this was unexpected in every way for me. I love it, Ashley! The care portrayed towards the alien is the most alien thing about this poem, I think. I can’t imagine anyone would do this if they found an alien body. I think you captured something really unique here, for the challenge’s prompt. Well done!
Just beautiful. Sounds like something I would do (and have done for road kill) if I found a battered body.
Sad and powerful! And not to mention a truly unique take on the challenge!
"Swiss Army Man" came to my mind. Was Radcliffe actually playing a human-shaped alien?:-D Nice poem! Did they get shipwrecked?
I like this a lot!