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The Far Side of Forever

In the hills along the bay

By Cathy holmesPublished 25 days ago 1 min read
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On the far side of forever,

in the hills along the bay,

the seabirds carry secrets

of the ones who lost their way.

*

In the watery graves of dreamers,

drawn to the sailors’ song,

the whales do sing in elegy

of their wanderlust gone wrong.

*

As the sun sets on the horizon,

drawing closed another day,

I think about the fishermen

beyond the hills along the bay.

*

Respectfully, I bow my head

to the mighty ocean blue,

and pray that she’ll be gentle,

and that home, she’ll guide them to.

*

On the far side of forever,

though my heart may long to stray,

my feet stand on the rocky shore

of the hills along the bay.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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Comments (31)

  • Tiffany Gordon 16 days ago

    Phenomenal!

  • Thank you.

  • Cheryl E Preston17 days ago

    Great poetry. Congrats on your top story.

  • Heather Hubler19 days ago

    Incredibly beautiful poetry, my friend. Your words just swept me away. Loved the pic!!

  • Gerald Holmes20 days ago

    Simply Beautiful. Well done Sis.

  • Hannah Moore21 days ago

    I kind of want to see this illustrated with paintings.

  • Rasma Raisters21 days ago

    Beautiful and love the rhythm and rhyme here,

  • Thoom Willit22 days ago

    So sad. I hope the sea guides their lost souls to peace. What a beautiful sentiment ❤️

  • Some wonderful words Cathy

  • Very soothing lines. Refreshing our minds.

  • Novel Allen23 days ago

    I wish I was standing there right now, sounds so lively. UMMMMM! Meditation.

  • K. Kocheryan24 days ago

    Oh, this was so pretty. The first stanza is fantastic!

  • D.K. Shepard24 days ago

    STUNNING!! An absolutely top notch piece of poetry! Lovely photo too!

  • Grz Colm24 days ago

    PHOAR… this had a bit of a punch for me of something that happened to a friends’ family members quite recently! I didn’t know them but yeah, challenging for my friend. Beautifully written as always Cathy! ☺️👏 Hope you are travelling well too. Have a good one!

  • Gina C.24 days ago

    Absolutely gorgeous 🥹

  • Fly Alone24 days ago

    Longing, loss and reverence for the sea. Climax: Painfully affecting the feelings. Great...

  • Bugsy Watts25 days ago

    This poem moves like gentle waves lapping on the beach. Well done, Cathy!

  • Dawnxisoul393art25 days ago

    Your poetic verses paint a poignant and evocative picture of the mysterious and treacherous nature of the sea, great work!

  • Andrea Corwin 25 days ago

    YEAH, that is where my feet prefer, the shore!! Beautiful poem, Cathy, I loved the rhyming and the visuals.

  • Caroline Craven25 days ago

    Stunning. I really loved this.

  • Poppy 25 days ago

    So gorgeous Cathy

  • Ohhh .... so beautiful and melancholy... a poem like a seagull's cry.

  • This had a sense of melancholia and made me feel things that I can't quite put into words. Loved your poem and your gorgeous photo!

  • Gabriel Huizenga25 days ago

    This feels timeless and transcendent- a beautiful requiem for the wandering and lost. <3 I want to turn it into a song, it feels rhythmic and musical!

  • Babs Iverson25 days ago

    Beautiful nature poem!!! It touched my heart!!!♥♥♥

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