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Blossom

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By Ellie HoovsPublished 12 days ago Updated 11 days ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Blossom
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She cannot come into her own,

not in yours, or even her own timing.

but when the concrete breaks under her feet & she appears...

... they'll talk about it for years, and years.

Will he see her as more than a weed in driveway cracks?

Will he see her as a sunflower hellbent on chasing the sun?

Will he put her in a vase, on a shelf - tell her she's the one?

or will he plant her in a garden?

Will he make sure she has water - build her an Eden?

Will he let her blossom?

and whatever bed she makes

will she let herself blossom?

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Ellie Hoovs

I'm an all American girl, born and raised in Virginia. I have 5 beautiful daughters who are often my inspiration and motivation. I have always had a passion for writing and what I share is a glimpse into the depths of my heart & soul

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Comments (16)

  • S.K. Wilson5 days ago

    Wow! Loved this! So much heart and soul in it! 🩷 Well deserved TS!

  • Andrea Corwin 7 days ago

    This is a beautifully wrought poem! I loved it! Heartfelt and visual. Congrats on TS🥳🥳❣️

  • Lana V Lynx9 days ago

    Beautiful poem, capturing many relationships’ essence and dynamics.

  • Joe Patterson10 days ago

    Congratulations on top story.

  • The Dani Writer10 days ago

    Hooo! That was such wonderfully unexpected "Yay!" Excellent top story!

  • Cyrus10 days ago

    Great work and congrats on TS!

  • Norden Lucas10 days ago

    Excellent Ellie. Sub back🙏

  • Sam Avery10 days ago

    Excellent work amazing good job.

  • Ameer Bibi10 days ago

    suoerbly penned many congratulations on TS

  • Rachel S10 days ago

    Beautifully written with a strong sense of emotion!

  • Sudipta D11 days ago

    Nice!

  • Liam Storm11 days ago

    Great poem! Congrats on top story!

  • Nidhi Gohil 11 days ago

    Loved it.

  • Sabinna Luweleng11 days ago

    Sad poem, thanks for sharing

  • angela hepworth12 days ago

    So sad and thought provoking.

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