This poem is js a little poem that I made for fun. I hope you enjoy!!!
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Elegantly it soars,
Like a lion in a fight it roars.
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
It has a different story with each colorful scale,
A tiny creature that can never fail.
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
It never fails to impress,
It’s like a criminal that needs to confess.
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
Its fragile little wings like glass,
Beat to a beat that is honest and fast.
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
It’s like a queen at a ball,
Or a beautiful bride, if she were to fall.
🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋🦋
Although its size it never gives up!
For all the tiny bugs, this one takes the cup!
About the Creator
Dasani Jones
Hi! My name is Dasani, but my friends call me DD.
I am a collage student with big hopes and dreams.
I go to Fashion Institute of Technology and hope to become a fashion artist.
I am a part-time poet/author. Hope you enjoy them!😘😉❤️🔥
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Comments (4)
I like to discover new poets, or rather those new to writing in general of any age. I subscribed and hope you continue to use this venue to explore your heart and the world in front of you ( or some of the parts you left behind).
Loved this poem. Great prose
It never fails to impress, It’s like a criminal that needs to confess. These were my favourite lines! Loved your poem!
This is the most beautiful description of a butterfly that I have ever heard. It is very well-written, fun, beautiful, and very engaging.