So it's 1am
And you're in your bathtub
You took a class once where you learned not to write bathtub stories
But this isn't really about the tub
It's just where you are
At 1am
You just finished telling your friends all about him
How the way he looks at you now breaks your heart
They say you deserve better
And you're hopeful
You think you're starting to believe them
People ask why you cut your hair
Why it's so dark now
You usually say something like
"It was time for a change"
But honestly?
You wanted to feel like anyone but yourself.
In case you forgot
You're still in the tub
And you're thinking about the water
It swirls and wraps around you
Closer to you than any blanket or man could ever get
Interesting how we disregard things that try their best to keep us warm
Drain the excess
What we believe we don't need
Maybe you're right
You're excess
Unneeded
Unwanted
Non profound
And washed up
Or maybe that's not you
You are
Excellent
Needed
Wanted
Profound
And clean
The bath water is starting to get cold
About the Creator
Chloe Hauxwell
Hello and welcome to my profile. I'm on here trying to be a writer. I don't have a specific genre I stick to, so if you like eclectic then mine is the page for you! All feedback and critiques are welcomed. I'm always trying to improve. ☺️
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