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That Which Falls From Above

Water is Life is Magic

By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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That Which Falls From Above
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Rain drops fall ever-so softly below

It greets this dear foreigner like a sighing hello

Where saltless tears lay blessings upon flora

There is this sudden bloom of euphoria

~

We dare ask, how can a world with so much variety

Sing in such a hushed piety

While war and power and greed rage on

Here is the gentlest of nature’s song

~

The droplets slide across bare speckled skin

As this strangeness is suddenly akin

The moisture hugs and clings with humbleness

Yet it is not something one would think to ever miss

~

For when you leave and whisper to others this story

You’ll recall the simplest touch of shimmered glory

For this is life that waters as it falls

Without a single ask or doubt at all

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Oneg In The Arctic

A storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices

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  • Denise E Lindquist8 months ago

    Nice! Thank you 😊💕❤️

  • ThatWriterWoman8 months ago

    Beautiful! this felt like reading in a rainstorm! Gorgeous!

  • Donna Renee8 months ago

    This made me crave the feeling of being in the rain. Each line was individually beautiful and the effect of them together was just, I don’t even know what to call it…. Musical maybe? I loved it! ❤️

  • Sarah D8 months ago

    beautiful thoughts about the rain, and our coinciding feelings. Read mine? https://vocal.media/poets/waking-up-perfectly-normal

  • Heather Hubler8 months ago

    Oh this was so good! Loved these lines, "While war and power and greed rage on, Here is the gentlest of nature’s song" Bravo, Oneg :)

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Beautifully written!!! Love this!!!

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Lovely work Oneg!

  • This was extremely breathtaking! So calm, soothing, poignant and beautiful!

  • Beautiful! ❤️✨

  • Poppy 8 months ago

    So sweet and relaxing to read

  • Cathy holmes8 months ago

    This is just gorgeous. Love it.

  • Beautifully written. I must say this is your best poem yet. So subtle yet direct.

  • Nice❤️📝👌

  • Joe Patterson8 months ago

    Well done, Oneg. Great sense of description.

  • Mackenzie Davis8 months ago

    This is breathtakingly wonderful. Sublime. Each word, every line, is as delicate as a petal, and I don't want to hold it too roughly. "The moisture hugs and clings with humbleness Yet it is not something one would think to ever miss" You capture a moment masterfully.

  • Cendrine Marrouat8 months ago

    Oneg, this is my favorite poem of yours. Very poignant and an important reminder of the preciousness of nature. Thank you!

  • I love the rain, even more than I love your poem, which I do indeed love.

  • Test8 months ago

    Beautifully done. The 'Soft caress amidst chaos.' encasulates so much. If only we would learn 🤍

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