The love I feel for you,
Is beyond compare.
I love you so much,
That I can’t help but stare.
I love your sparkling eyes,
And your long red hair.
But the way I feel now,
It’s just not fair.
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You know that right now,
I’m feeling so low.
You are my strength,
I’ve already told you so.
So why does it feel,
That you’re about to go?
And I’ll be left where I was,
Some time ago.
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You must know these things,
Look so very wrong.
Between you and him,
Tell me what’s going on?
No relationship,
Is ever like a song.
But recently,
You’ve been emotionally gone.
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Inappropriate things,
Going on out of sight?
Does somebody else,
Get the warmth of your light?
Because the way that I’m feeling,
Means I can’t sleep at night.
So, please, tell me I’m wrong,
Or tell me I’m right.
About the Creator
Luke Foster
Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.
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Comments (8)
Wonderful poem full of sentiment! I felt your heart in this. Heartbreaking yet very well penned!
So very sad 😔
many hugs to you
I felt this deeply
You captured the rawness of being stuck in the middle beautifully.
😉✌️💯You are Right❗
Describes that feeling of knowing what you don't want to know perfectly ❤️
Ohhhh, heartbreaking!!!💖💖💕