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Take me back to the night we met

Remembering the Moment We Fell in Love

By NobodyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Take me back to the night we met,

When our eyes locked and our hearts were set.

The world was silent, the stars were bright,

And in that moment, everything felt right.

The moon shone down upon our heads,

As we stood there, with no words said.

But our souls spoke in a language so true,

That nothing in the world could misconstrue.

The night was ours, and ours alone,

As we danced together to our own unknown tone.

The music of the universe played in our ears,

And the rhythm of our hearts dispelled all fears.

I wish I could go back to that moment in time,

And relive the magic of that night divine.

To hold you close and never let go,

And dance with you under the starry glow.

Take me back to the night we met,

When we were two hearts that beat as one and yet,

The memories linger on and bring me joy,

For in that moment, I was with my love, my joy.

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About the Creator

Nobody

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  • Novel Allen11 months ago

    Another great read. This is wonderful. I have read four so far. All brilliant. Saving some for later.

  • Cezanne Libellen11 months ago

    Great job! I love this poem!

  • Beautiful

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    Very romantic, thank you 😊

  • Mariyam Azizabout a year ago

    incredible

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