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Sunshine night

Eclipse challenge

By emaPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Sunshine night
Photo by Anne Nygård on Unsplash

Eyes like a mirror of liquid fire

Collide with a wall of beliefs

Labeled as an extinct cold star,

Ice melts in a long moment

Pouring wisdom on a dry land.

Sail towards a sunshine night

Eat out fear and bring back the light.

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Thank you for reading!

love poemsinspirationalFree VerseAcrostic
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About the Creator

ema

I invent stories, sometimes they need to be written.

Carpe Diem Tempus Fugit.

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  • Marilyn Gloverabout a month ago

    I love, love, love the last line so much, Ema!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    This is inspire me ♥️

  • Joe O’Connorabout a month ago

    Labeled as an extinct cold star” is a great line Ema, and this is full of nature imagery!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was sooooo beautifully crafted! Loved your Acrostic!

  • Michelle Liewabout a month ago

    You've said what needs to be done on this Earth, Ema. Well done.

  • Miss Catherineabout a month ago

    Well structured, very good work Ema.

  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Loved your lines "Ice melts in a long moment Pouring wisdom on a dry land." Beautiful!

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