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Summer Night

With him...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about a year ago β€’ Updated 9 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Summer Night
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Blushing 😊

Like a warm breeze,

You Brushed up Against my Heart β™₯️

I gave birth to Butterflies πŸ¦‹ from the Thought of you!!

The Smell of Barbecue πŸ–

And the Taste of the Sun...

Just Reminiscing of sum Summertime Fun!

Transforming Time to a Snail 🐌 the Moment I Met You...

Like a Slumber Party and Pj’s

We came Together.

Like Ice-cream 🍦 and a Cone, I Melted into you!

The way I Felt stood out

Like a Cool Night with a Misty Moon 🌚

I’ll never forget that June;

Like Fireflies luminating β€œlight”

Flying high by Yourside

Lost in the Night …

🌟 Starlight and ✨ stars are Bright

You only live one life.

That’s what my conscious

Kept telling me as I Lay Dutifully on the
Rooftop with him,

By Ian Schneider on Unsplash

That Summernight.

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Cynthia Fieldsabout a year ago

    Love this!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Just beautiful! Absolutely wonderful! 😍

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Lovely!!! Love this!!!

  • Max Russellabout a year ago

    Beautiful story and setting! Thank you for sharing! 😁

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Ohhh you set a beautiful picture and tone here.

  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    Wonderful, Lonzo πŸ’•πŸ™‚

  • Mohamed Jakkathabout a year ago

    Beautifully written! 🀩 I can feel the warmth and magic of that summer night through your words. πŸŒ… It's amazing how a moment with someone special can create such unforgettable memories. Thank you for sharing your experience with us. ❀️

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem. Well done.

  • Awww, this was so sweet!

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Heart pulsing memory. Great capture in moving poetic form. πŸ₯°

  • Wistful, dreamy, a memory to carry & sustain you. I take it the relationship did not last, at least in the temporal sense. But the memory carries with it the hope & possibility of another, perhaps even more than the first, that one day will be yours. Blessings, & may your yearnings find a resting place in someone worthy of your love.

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    Moment captured - something for all the senses. Fabulous :)

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Great timing my friend! We just had a super-late in the season dump of snow. It's pretty in the sunlight, but very unwelcome. Your romantic trip to summertime was practically a lifesaver!

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