Subatomic Rave
#abecedarian challenge
atoms, gimme those universal
building blocks of
chemistry and matter
deciding the very structure with
electrons gettin busy
filling shells and wavin pretty,
generating cloudy negativity,
hoping for completion
in positivity? or maybe bondage proclivity?
juxtaposition
kindling attraction,
latching on to one another,
masterful interaction,
neutrons starring
opposite their hadron bosom besties,
particles up and double down, those
quirky quarks not messin around,
reacting in a bounce-back
subatomic spectacle,
theorizing fusion fundamentals,
unraveling the strong interaction of
vanquished original vacuums,
wielding architectural energy, with that
x-factor, that special somethin, somethin,
yelling complexities into being, a
zillion sources for a primal-flavor rave.
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Thank you so much for reading (or trying to at least). Clearly I took some poetic liberties with the subject matter, so don't judge too harshly, pretty please :)
Now go back and read it with this playing in the background. Then get up and dance, kick a chair, scream into the void.
https://youtu.be/PasLhCLgwfw?si=VUfpub-GcOnD5-cw, Hardwell
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Comments (21)
Very pacy - I could actually feel my neutrons firing! π π
Ahh! Gotta love science. You had me at the title, lol. Fun and creative stuff, Heather.
This flowed so well I couldnβt even tell there was limitations it had to follow
Really good entry, best of luck in the challenge! You smashed those hard letters at the end!
That bounces! Love it. I especially love the idea of a "primal flavor rave" Sounds like my sort of party! π
Whoaaaa! This blew my mind! Your brain is phenomenal and you are so brilliant! This was freaking out of this world!
I feel like this was a sexy rap to science :D
Judge to harshly? I want to hear you rap this, Heather! Great job!
Another great poem
Excellent scientific tilt at the challenge
This was great. I love βquirky quarks not messin aroundβ. You turned such a complex matter into something sort of street and hilarious at the same time. Well done.
Love the βZillionβ Once again great work
Brilliant! Love the science thread! π€ So well done x
I know you love the science poems!
Fantastic, great writing skills, Really enjoyed.
Man! Raising the bar. How can I compete with this?
NERD! Loved it. Well done, lassie! Well bloody done! Reminded me a little of Chemical Calisthenics by Blackalicious. :) That's the group that did Alphabet Aerobics and it's a similar tongue-twister, with a science-edge.
Love the voice in this one, Sissy! Big bro is impressed and I know I've got some catching up on reading to do. I'll get on that soon!
Well, that was Nerdy and kinda sexy too. "electrons gettin busy filling shells and wavin pretty," LOL. Well done, my brilliant friend.
Super & superbly written!!! Loved the rhythm!!! Well done!!!β₯οΈβ₯οΈπ
I love this one, Heather!