Still Alive and Kicking
A Tennyson style poem for vocal assist challenge
I wear my years upon my face,
Each wrinkle formed in times of strife.
Careworn by hardships of my life,
Those darker moments leave their trace.
I’m also marked by happy times,
Joyous frolics of the youthful.
My eyes, some still call beautiful,
Though cradled now with laughter lines.
I may no longer dance all night,
Or drink and laugh until I burst,
It’s cocoa now for which I thirst,
And 10pm my new midnight.
But please don’t think my life is sad,
The simple things are still worthwhile -
A steaming bath with chamomile
And glass of wine is not so bad.
My blood pressure is sometimes high,
My hands are stiff when first I wake,
Yet there are many crafts to make
And books to read before I die.
So don’t think just because I’m old
That all my better days have passed,
There’s pleasure even till the last,
And I have stories still untold.
About the Creator
Angel Whelan
Angel Whelan writes the kind of stories that once had her checking her closet each night, afraid to switch off the light.
Finalist in the Vocal Plus and Return of The Night Owl challenges.
Comments (9)
This poem made my heart sing! Well done!
Nice! I especially liked the line where the speaker’s eyes are described as “cradled now with laughter lines.” Love this image!
A great commentary on what it means to grow old. There is much beauty and wisdom in the process.
This was lovey!!!
Beautiful work.
This is beautiful. Well done.
The best stories come from honest responses to pain. Great job
Beautifully done :)
Very well done. Good professional work!