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Southbound

destination - sin?

By Heather HublerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Warning: Sexiness below...

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sticky steamy sweltry,

sleepy supine spine,

savoring siesta,

sipping sauvignon.

suffering.

sighing softly,

slipping slightly,

skimming slowly,

sliding south.

savoring sensitive,

silken smoothness.

scraping,

sucking,

sampling,

sumptuously sinful skin.

shiver, shift, shudder, shout,

slick spasming,

salaciously satisfying–

sublime.

singing summer's siren song,

sultry, sexy slave.

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Tried a little something different this time. Hope you enjoyed (smirky wink) and thank you for reading!

Written for the Tautogram challenge.

If you're unfamiliar with the style, here is Vocal's explanation in the challenge description: A tautogram is basically a fancy term for a word game where every word starts with the same letter or sound. It's like alliteration, but taken to the extreme! It can be a fun way to play with language and create a memorable effect in writing or speech, as well as an effective way to challenge yourself as a writer.

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Comments (29)

  • Testabout a year ago

    Superb, Heather! 💕🙂

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Loved it. Nailed it. You're definitely going to write my wedding vows the next time I get married. LOL :)

  • Oneg In The Arcticabout a year ago

    You’re killin’ it with these tautograms!

  • Brannan K.about a year ago

    Sincerely sensual!

  • Sex sex sex Sex sex Sex sex sex sex sex Sex Sex sex sex Hope you enjoyed my sexy Tautogram, lol! Again, don't know what's wrong with me. But I absolutely loved yours!

  • Jason Ray Morton about a year ago

    Impressively hot

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Not long ago you’d have ended it with …..Smoking sanguinely! Okay, I’m off to the cold shower. 😂 This is 🔥🔥🔥🔥

  • Brin J.about a year ago

    oooooo😏 everyone's getting smutty with the tautogram.

  • Beth Sarahabout a year ago

    Love this! One of my favourites so far 👏

  • You got it❗💬✨💖😉

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Salaciously sexually satisfying! Surprised "suckling"'s separated. Sum "suckling"? So secretively strange. Scrumptious suggestive styling. Sustain steadying.

  • Nicely naughty

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Hold on Jason Momoa and I are having a moment, I mean my hubby, lol. Nice sultry tautogram 💋

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Steamy...sultry...stupendous!

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Wow, it just got a little steamy in here 🔥

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    You should have warned me! Oh! you did... Loved the last, it expresses the tone very well.

  • Dean F. Hardyabout a year ago

    "Sipping sauvignon"

  • Technically, & as a theologian, I feel the need to point out that "sin" means "to miss the mark." You definitely did not miss the mark with this piece, lol! This would be sin in what is perhaps the singularly most positive sense of the word.

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Oh my! My glasses fogged reading it. ❤️ The warning is awesome! You nailed it in everyway!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    great tautogram and haha-- perfect warning 🤣🤣❤

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Super superb!!! 💖💖💕

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Steam, sexy, superb. (Exhales)

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    Hot-o-gram 🔥

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Gee, at first I thought you were describing a popsicle…….. That was a good morning read, lol. Well done

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Damn. Is it hot in here? 😅🔥 Also, I misread “shift” as “shaft” and I was like, oh hey! 😅 This was definitely sexy and sultry! Nailed it! ❤️

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