Note
Wave
Pass
On
Love
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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I AM
This is not who I thought I would be. Before my family was captured and forced into slavery, I had aspirations of becoming a wealthy business owner or possibly a scholar and philosopher. Becoming a warrior was the furthest thing from my mind. Unfortunately, our Roman conquerors had other plans.
By Mark Gagnona day ago in Fiction
Comments (7)
All the words needed to say so much!! Wonderful work, Mariann :)
This was as short and sweet as it gets Great Job!
Note to self.... Note the other & wave.... Becomes notes in a song as we share love with another. This is how it speaks to me, Mariann, but I love how you leave it undefined that we might each find our own meaning in these five words & lines.
Fantastic!!! Short & sweet!!!♥️♥️💕
five substantial words, love it, I’m with Dharrsheena, music is the whisper of the soul 😊
Very nice.
Sometimes songs can communicate the feelings we fail to put into words. Lyrics speak so much. Loved your poem!