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Simon Petrikov & Betty (Adventure Time)

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
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I wrap us, in vain

In safe bubbles, floating down

My love cloudy pain

—-

Can we be in love

Away in timelines far gone?

Darling Betty, yes

——

I’m your man, in pain

Wrapt up in forlorn passion

I need your dense love

——

My princess, take me

Wrap my head around your legs

Drinking your soft coos

——

Love Hangover, lost

My loins robbed from your soft spots,

Lonely, dark, crazy

——

Fighting my damning

Frisson, catapulted in

Lust, I miss you fierce

——

Safe bubbles lift up

To fly away… I lost you

My whole life and love

——

If I die in your

Arms, I’ll be satisfied, dear

Normal isn’t free

—-

Kissing your low lips

cry out my name in between

Layers of deep sin

——

Not a sin to love

It was a sin to lose you

Lose myself deep down

——

Can I wrap our time

Loop in safe bubbles, to stop

Losing you, Betty?

—-

My tears freeze up, drain

I still have a heart, my mind

A log on still streams.

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

I am a published author on Patheos,

I am Bexley by Resurgence Novels

The Half Paper Moon on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.

My novella The Job and Atonement will be published this year by JMS Books

Carnivorous published by Eukalypto

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  • C. Rommial Butler8 months ago

    "I still have a heart, my mind A log on still streams." Love this imagery! Made me think of this quote from Nietzsche's "Human, All Too Human": “Impossible intercourse. The ship of your thoughts goes too deep for you to be able to travel with it in the waters of these friendly, decorous, obliging people. There are too many shallows and sandbanks: you would have to tack and turn, and would find yourself continually at wits' end, and they would soon also be in perplexity as to your perplexity, the reason for which they cannot divine.”

  • It was a sin to lose you. That line hit me so hard! You wrote this so beautifully!

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Phenomenal writing! Sensual & steamy! Great job Mel!

  • "'Tis better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all." But it still hurts like a bugger.

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    “It was a sin to lose you” The whole thing is so sultry, but that line almost stopped me in my tracks entirely. What a line! 💕

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    very passionate poem. Love it

  • Mariann Carroll8 months ago

    Steamy and passionate poem for sure , muy Clinate

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