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Rule Breaker

Sometimes consequences are felt.

By KJ AartilaPublished 4 days ago Updated 4 days ago 1 min read
Rule Breaker
Photo by lilartsy on Unsplash

These actions are the consequence

of delusional charade -

***

it's my fault for opinions

it's my fault for my life

my fault for intentions

my fault for my right

***

now the line is drawn

and you blame me for my truth -

***

it's my fault for opinions

it's my fault for my life

my fault for intentions

my fault for my right

***

I will not wear a mask for you,

I really hate your game -

***

it's my fault for opinions

it's my fault for my life

my fault for intentions

my fault for my right

***

and so, I’ve changed the rules.

Song LyricsStream of Consciousnesssocial commentarySestinaMental HealthFree VerseBallad

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KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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Comments (7)

  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred3 days ago

    Deep and powerful. Great message and image

  • Oooo, this was so freaking powerful! I loved it!

  • Andrea Corwin 4 days ago

    Yep, no masks, do you, and others like it or not - doesn’t matter as long as you are okay with it. 😍

  • T. Licht4 days ago

    Great poem! Love that ending!

  • Yeah, indeed sometimes we feel like that. Very natural. Liked your work.

  • Well-wrought! A nice hammer of a chorus there! The game does get boring, when there are only so many moves to play, and masters will only again and again force the proverbial stalemate. Better to exist beyond it, certainly...

  • Judey Kalchik 4 days ago

    The repetition makes the single line closure so much POW! impactful.

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