remember, o bulb
another reflection on the wisdom in nature
A bulb was placed in fertile ground
Its vibrance was so clear
But quickly this new seedling found
Growth is not so dear
Soon winter months, they came around
Poor child lost all hope
‘Who can in cold, grow, strive, abound?
Surviving is beyond the scope.’
But little sprout, oh most profound!
Beneath the soil deep
Growing strong without a sound
Your roots are not asleep.
‘Oh spring has come, it's finally found
My growth will now begin!’
Another frost will soon confound
The sprout, so sure within
Remember, o bulb, the years compound
This is not your winter first
Remember when you felt so drowned
The rain! completely submersed.
Recall, small one, Gardener aroused
Tenderly covered your flesh
Though on him the rain did pound
He nourished your soil afresh
Learn of your former blooms so round
Their fragrance marked by care
Not by your glory are your petals crowned
But by the Gardener fair
The winter toil still resounds
But now in branches strong
Made for the viewer to astound
‘To whom do these belong?’
So fear not, my dear, when clouds
Drown out your pleasant days
Recall your roots, in Whom they’re bound
Find joy in the narrow way.
About the Creator
cosette alize
I write stories, because I live a story. No fantasy world will ever compare to the one we live in. I want to describe our world in a way that reveals the Creator's magic, and write fantasy world's in a way that illuminates our reality.
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I love the ambiguity of this poem - so many interpretations. I relate this to my spiritual life in struggling with sin, but knowing God loves me all the while :) Lovely work