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His story may repeat, but her voice will echo longer

By JPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
A Slice Of Hope - Eko Bintang

Bitter melon seeds

Water the ground like bullets

Planted, as children

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I will not say: do not weep; for not all tears are an evil

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Comments (3)

  • Novel Allen4 months ago

    So many layers to these words, sad, happy, old life growing up into new life. Hope, possibilities, on and on I still go. Lovely and deep words.

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    And what will grow? There's a lot to play with from this, in my mind. It's meaning is not clear and so my brain lingers on possibilities.

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Wow, amazing haiku!🫶

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