Provisional Equality
A Subconscious Effort: Villanelle
This moment will triumph and crystalize,
leaving examples of harmony in its wake.
Declare your right to be utterly glamorized.
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Backwards we go, longing to chastise,
at the turn of the cheek,
this moment will triumph and crystalize.
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Fly, Fly away to those barren skies,
where uncertainty awaits your return.
Declare your right to be utterly glamorized.
*
My thoughts, once static, begin to catalyze,
lifting me up to comfort my soul.
This moment will triumph and crystalize.
*
Search for ambition, keep your eye on the prize.
For it relinquishes the grief and spite.
Declare your right to be utterly glamorized.
*
Unified efforts will soon be immortalized,
granting you deserved rites of passage.
This moment will triumph and crystalize.
Declare your right to be utterly glamorized.
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry. Take a chance, you'll be thoroughly entertained.
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I am in no way surprised this was a top story! I could hear beautiful R&B music in my head while I was reading this. Immersive, deep and uplifting! Just awesome!!
This is quite a piece. Powerful, Lamar. Well said ans many congrats to you 😊
L-bud - According to Nietzche his philosophy of 'turning the other check' is a little unworkable of late. - Thanks for this - J-bud
Powerful words and a tough form well executed! Well done, my friend! Congratulations!
Ooof... that was fierce! Nicely done.
Wow I love the message love how powerful your words are. Congrats on the top story. Really well deserved.
A round of applause sir, a magnificent and important poem. Love the balanced perspective. Congratulations on Top story!
Another great TS. Congratulations and well done Lamar. Always good to see
Way To Go, Lamar✨😉📝👌🎉Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Such a phenomenal piece, Lamar! You powerfully executed that style! Brilliant and beautiful job!!! Congrats on top story, so well deserved! 💫💞
Congratulations on TS, this was such a great one for you to get the recognition you deserve!! 🎉 Also, would you like me to comment on the link bomber below? I have some article they might be interested in... 😈
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I have got to get the Villanelle thing down pat. I read about it but now this is so wonderful, I will really give a closer look. Congrats, poetry in motion.
This was a brilliant piece, catchy and lyrical. Congrats on a well-deserved TS!!
Swinging back to say congratulations!! 🎉💖🩵
This is spectacular. Meant to read it the other day there when it was first published...forgot. Read it now and can see why it is deserving of Top Story! Well done, Lamar!
This had a song-like quality. I love your word choice ☺️ Congrats on the top story
It's refreshing...it left me prepared to be glamorized. Beautifully written, Lamar!
Lamar I appreciate the rhyme scheme of this poem! I also like the repetitive language that adds extra emphasis to your message! Keep up the great work!
I tried to declare it once. Everyone simply laughed. Great poem, though. Very encouraging. Maybe I'll try again.
This was soooo powerful! You also perfectly executed the Villanelle! It's a format that I'm so terrifed to try, lol!
This is brilliant. I opened it last night when you published it but realised immediately I was too tired to give it the level of focus it deserved! So, back again. Outstanding, Lamar!❤️✨🙏
gorgeous work Lamar!
Awesome! Really inspiring, friend. Good job.
Wow, that was so good! Giving me the feeling that a moment could materialize and become something tangible. Loved the flow of this! Great stuff!