I pray for you. Too bad
That neither you nor I
Believe in healing power of prayers
We know too well what’s ours and what’s theirs
We know too well the well is running dry
Not even souls will last ad infinitum
When there’s so little to excite them
There is no mending once the weave is torn
Perhaps one day renewed refreshed reborn
We’ll realize that we were simply mad
Until such time
Whenever that may be
I pray for you. And you -
Please pray for me.
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Vadim Kagan
I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!
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I pray for your well-being, my friend. Hope you are well. However, nice poem.
‘We know too well the well is running dry’ Yes, even so, we pray.
prayer is good, we all need prayer, nice poem my friend
Soft yet powerful! ❣️
This was very emotional. You've written this very beautifully. Let's keep each other in our prayers. Loved your poem!
Vadim, I have the same thoughts as you, my friend. The lines were carefully thought and written. Good job, my friend. Subscribed, commented, hearted, and provided my insight on your writing.