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pillow blind

an eclipse acrostic

By Ward NorcuttPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - April 2024
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pillow blind
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

Early morning

Cranes its head over the wall of the world

Looking for me, but

I am still

Pillow blind within the

Soft

Embrace of night

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About the Creator

Ward Norcutt

Playwright and poet.

My goal as a writer is to write thoughtful pieces of prose, poetry and stage plays. Hopefully, the end results are entertaining and engaging, with layers of meaning that make sense to the whole or a theme therein.

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  • Christy Munsonabout a month ago

    Brilliant! Love the ways you've worked with words in this one. A triumph. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Anna about a month ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • ROCK about a month ago

    Perfectly beautful!

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a month ago

    Nice and simple, congrats!

  • Caroline Janeabout a month ago

    Really liked this acrostic Ward. Nicely done.

  • The Writer about a month ago

    Congratulations!!!

  • Miss Catherineabout a month ago

    Amazing, congratulations!

  • Nono Fabrice about a month ago

    Beautifully written

  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    What amazing visuals!

  • Sonia Heidi Unruhabout a month ago

    Simply lovely portrait of a gentle moment. Has the feel of a haiku.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a month ago

    Congrats on this melancholic moment getting a top story. Another great piece whopper

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    I love the visual of morning craving its head over the wall. Simply wonderful. Congrats on the TS.

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    I wish I was pillow blind most days, instead I think I'm the one peeking over the edge anymore. Wonderful word choices :)

  • Rachel Deemingabout a month ago

    I like the way you've personified early morning, like a friend coming to see if you can play. Or a nosey neighbour.

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Beautiful! 😍

  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    The poem captures the serene moment of morning beautifully. It's a reflection on the stillness before embracing the day.

  • D. J. Reddallabout a month ago

    You've nailed the brief and conjured a sympathetic persona at once. Nice work!

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