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Persistent Puzzle

A Poem on Tough Decisions

By Michelle LiewPublished 12 days ago 1 min read
Persistent Puzzle
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My family is going through a transitory phase - we cannot decide whether to leave my father-in-law, who has dementia at an Eldercare Facility during the day. 

The decision is tough. On the one hand, there is a feeling of neglect - understandably so. On the other, no one at home has the expertise to care for him themselves.

My father-in-law's stubbornness makes it tougher to decide. 

And there we have a persistent puzzle - how do we decide between what is best and managing feelings?

Not to trivialize the situation, but it takes a weighing of options, being adaptable, a trust of the self, and yes, being tough when the situation calls for it. 

And that's the nature of life -it's a persistent puzzle that cannot be solved at once. 

We take it a day at a time. Enjoy these cinquains. 

Puzzle

Persists, insists

Pieces scattered and hard to find

An every-present conundrum

To solve

Puzzle

Fits in all ways

One must choose the angle

And change fluid form when needed

To fix. 

Cinquaininspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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Comments (4)

  • Dawnxisoul393art11 days ago

    Your words beautifully capture the essence of this ongoing struggle and the need for adaptability, trust, and resilience.

  • Nice poem, difficult topic

  • CHRISTIAN P12 days ago

    Sweet poet

  • That is quite a tough decision to make. Loved your poem!

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