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Peace, Perfect Peace?

A Rick Henry Christopher Peace on Earth Challenge

By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶Published 4 months ago 1 min read
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Hudson and his doting admirer!

What a glorious morning!

Magnificent magpie’s golden notes… onto dawn’s pristine canvas spill,

Whilst chattering, purple, Pale-headed Rosellas frolic.

A zephyr flaps my exhilarated Labrador, Hudson’s floppy ears

As he lollops down the hill…

Darting excitedly to greet his girlfriend… a younger version of him.

Ah… peace, perfect peace!

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Sunbeams softly kiss my cheek…

Alack and alas… her heart throb is not everyone’s hero!

Dabbling Mallard Ducks serenely sail on by… down the creek.

An unsociable Golden Lab growls grumpily and rates him a Zero!

Boxer dog’s laser beam gaze locks on…

Full Alert, raring to pounce and give chase…

Oblivious, Huddy ambles along, curiously inspecting a spooked ginger Tom

Their peace, perfect peace has gone!

Statue Still… glaring at that hideous creature!

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Written for Rick's Peace on Earth Challenge.

humorFor Funfact or fiction
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About the Creator

Angie the Archivist 📚🪶

Addicted to reading, especially fiction and poetry.

Personality of a Labrador.

Attention span of a gnat! 😳

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  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    Sorry but Huddy is too adorable!

  • Gargie S Anand4 months ago

    Woah! So nicely described. I loved the ending though.

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    I felt so calm at the end of the first stanza, and then the tension mounts again!

  • Oooo, do you know what is Hudson's girlfriend's name? Also, I've only ever heard of alas, not alack. Thank you for teaching me somethings new!

  • Poppy 4 months ago

    Omg the dogs are soo adorable it melts my heart🥹🥰 Lovely poem Angie!

  • Alex H Mittelman 4 months ago

    Great entry into the challenge! Well written!

  • D.K. Shepard4 months ago

    Great narrative poem! Loved the play by play action!

  • sleepy drafts4 months ago

    This is so clever, Angie!! What a great take on the challenge. Fantastic poem!

  • Lana V Lynx4 months ago

    It’s like watching a Discovery channel in verse!

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