Peace, Perfect Peace?
A Rick Henry Christopher Peace on Earth Challenge
What a glorious morning!
Magnificent magpieās golden notesā¦ onto dawnās pristine canvas spill,
Whilst chattering, purple, Pale-headed Rosellas frolic.
A zephyr flaps my exhilarated Labrador, Hudsonās floppy ears
As he lollops down the hillā¦
Darting excitedly to greet his girlfriendā¦ a younger version of him.
Ahā¦ peace, perfect peace!
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Sunbeams softly kiss my cheekā¦
Alack and alasā¦ her heart throb is not everyoneās hero!
Dabbling Mallard Ducks serenely sail on byā¦ down the creek.
An unsociable Golden Lab growls grumpily and rates him a Zero!
Boxer dogās laser beam gaze locks onā¦
Full Alert, raring to pounce and give chaseā¦
Oblivious, Huddy ambles along, curiously inspecting a spooked ginger Tom
Their peace, perfect peace has gone!
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Written for Rick's Peace on Earth Challenge.
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Angie the Archivist ššŖ¶
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Comments (9)
Sorry but Huddy is too adorable!
Woah! So nicely described. I loved the ending though.
I felt so calm at the end of the first stanza, and then the tension mounts again!
Oooo, do you know what is Hudson's girlfriend's name? Also, I've only ever heard of alas, not alack. Thank you for teaching me somethings new!
Omg the dogs are soo adorable it melts my heartš„¹š„° Lovely poem Angie!
Great entry into the challenge! Well written!
Great narrative poem! Loved the play by play action!
This is so clever, Angie!! What a great take on the challenge. Fantastic poem!
Itās like watching a Discovery channel in verse!