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Pastina

An Acrostic

By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Pretty little pieces of pasta

absorbing that delicate chicken broth

sending me to my serene and happy place

The one where you are still alive

In your kitchen, often cooking for all of Scotland

No one could match you, biased I most definitely am

A once-in-a-lifetime individual, a hole in my heart you've left

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Thanks for reading!

Had this sitting there. Not sure it's my best but I like it.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

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  • Mariann Carroll10 months ago

    Comfort food🥰 for health eating

  • Beautiful tribute. Wonderful memories.

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Aww, that is sad and sweet.

  • Nonna! 💖 Also, why can't I see the star shape? Wonderful acrostic!

  • Naomi Gold10 months ago

    So bittersweet. 💔 Today, I brought my star-shaped pastina with freshly grated cheese from Italy to work to share with Audrey. It was toddler approved. Food is such a powerful way to express love. Your Nonna truly loved you, which makes the loss cut deep. Thanks for sharing this.

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Choosing your best would be difficult, to say the least. That said, this is a poignant and beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Gerald Holmes10 months ago

    Ouch! The ending hit me hard. Very well done.

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    Oh, the turn away from the soup to the cook was so poignant. I felt like I missed her just the same. 😢

  • Lamar Wiggins10 months ago

    Heartfelt, indeed. 💖

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    This is good! Really good!

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