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One Day, He Will Die ...

(101 years tormented his soul)

By KJ AartilaPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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One Day, He Will Die ...
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One Day, He Will Die …

(101 years tormented his soul)

I just found out by accident

my Grandpa died the other day

In my ever damaged mind, I grieved

over 40 years ago.

***

When I was just a little girl,

he put a dagger in my soul;

cloaked the murder in a secret,

never to be told.

***

His obit paints a cherished life -

people praise his kindness,

his love for God and country;

his need for family.

***

No one bothered tell me,

still afraid to see my light;

they much prefer the darkness.

No one then will see me dance

***

upon his dirty grave.

sad poetry
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About the Creator

KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

My Substack

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Omg, if this means what I think it means, then I'm so sorry this happened to you 🥺

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Wow ! Big 🤗. Powerful. Glad you can release it. 🥰

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh my. That really says a lot.

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