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A Blue Haiku

By Blake SPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Jay! stirs woodland's fringe.

Warmongering, dive-bombing,

the roused passerine.

nature poetry
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About the Creator

Blake S

Inspiration comes when friends follow their dreams. Writing helps me escape from reality into the world my mind creates, even if it is only for brief bursts at a time.

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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  • Jessiabout a year ago

    I love this! I have one in my back yard that always scares my cat haha

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    This is awesome Blake.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is great. Well done.

  • Donna Morgan about a year ago

    so well captured in so few words. fantastic job.

  • Gigi Gibsonabout a year ago

    This is so good because it’s true. And your choice of words flows very well. Great job!

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