Her heart~
A tempest starts to brew.
Her soul~
A masterpiece,
Fading from view~
~~~
Her tears fall like morning dew~
Each drop a testament to the pain within.
Her smile, a mask~
Concealing the truth,
Hiding from the storms din.
Her soul~
A masterpiece,
Fading from view~
~~~
She battles demons, both old and anew~
Yet what comes to bloom,
Is no good for feeling blue.
Her soul is trembling,
On the verge of giving in.
~
A tempest starts to brew,
Her soul~
A masterpiece,
Fading from view~
On the verge~
~
Authors Notes:
Thank you so much for reading! ๐
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Reaching Out
I promise her. I'd do anything for her. She's my mom. Even as Lanie and Deanna are flying home, Mom is scrappy fighting dying. She lays too still in that too-big bed with all the toasty white hospital blankets, in the south tower, at the broad end of a long slow-turning corner that delivers me again to her private room with the view she can't see through, with the beeping that tells us nothing new, and all these ice chips she can't swallow, and a flood of well-intentioned nurses who cannot do a damned thing all the same.
By Christy Munson5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (6)
This is so beautiful, Kodah!
Loved this Kodah!
This is EXACTLYYYYYYY how I'm feeling right now! I'm so sorry you're feeling the same ๐ฅบ Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ
Nice choice of images throughout to pair with the emotions Kodah. Excellent work! ๐๐
Inspiring and beautiful!
Beautiful like always Kodahโค๏ธ