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On the Verge~

Breaking Down

By KodahPublished 5 months ago โ€ข 1 min read

Her heart~

A tempest starts to brew.

Her soul~

A masterpiece,

Fading from view~


Her tears fall like morning dew~

Each drop a testament to the pain within.

Her smile, a mask~

Concealing the truth,

Hiding from the storms din.

Her soul~

A masterpiece,

Fading from view~


She battles demons, both old and anew~

Yet what comes to bloom,

Is no good for feeling blue.

Her soul is trembling,

On the verge of giving in.


A tempest starts to brew,

Her soul~

A masterpiece,

Fading from view~

On the verge~


Authors Notes:

Thank you so much for reading! ๐Ÿ’•

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About the Creator


- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical

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Reader insights


Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Manisha Dhalani5 months ago

    This is so beautiful, Kodah!

  • Lunaverse5 months ago

    Loved this Kodah!

  • This is EXACTLYYYYYYY how I'm feeling right now! I'm so sorry you're feeling the same ๐Ÿฅบ Sending you lots of love and hugs โค๏ธ

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Nice choice of images throughout to pair with the emotions Kodah. Excellent work! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

  • Carrie 5 months ago

    Inspiring and beautiful!

  • Jade Loson5 months ago

    Beautiful like always Kodahโค๏ธ

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