On Loan
Shout If You Need Me
I've always been fully aware,
That you were only given to me on loan,
I also knew this day would be hard,
The day you decided to head out on your own.
I poured my heart and soul into my role,
Usually at the expense of all else,
For 22 years I put life on hold,
To give you the tools to become yourself.
I did the very best I could with all I had,
Always putting your needs first,
To be both your mum and your dad
You could have done a lot worst.
You recently pointed out my failures,
Mostly that I gave you too much,
I'm sorry but that's who I am,
And could never change that as such.
I can only pray that I have done enough
To help you succeed from here on out,
That I’ve given you all the tools to survive
But remember if you need me just shout.
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About the Creator
Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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This one makes me cry every time I read it. Excellent work!
You're such a lovely mom