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Shout If You Need Me

By Colleen Millsteed Published 3 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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I've always been fully aware,

That you were only given to me on loan,

I also knew this day would be hard,

The day you decided to head out on your own.

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I poured my heart and soul into my role,

Usually at the expense of all else,

For 22 years I put life on hold,

To give you the tools to become yourself.

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I did the very best I could with all I had,

Always putting your needs first,

To be both your mum and your dad

You could have done a lot worst.

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You recently pointed out my failures,

Mostly that I gave you too much,

I'm sorry but that's who I am,

And could never change that as such.

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I can only pray that I have done enough

To help you succeed from here on out,

That I’ve given you all the tools to survive

But remember if you need me just shout.

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Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    This one makes me cry every time I read it. Excellent work!

  • You're such a lovely mom

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