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Oh, Brother!

a sonnet

By John McFaulPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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I follow you and slip on rotting fruit.

Swarming mosquitos stick to sunburnt skin.

“Look there fathead, I see the pirate’s loot.”

“Look there, see where the dark banyans begin?”

I force a smile and wipe my bothered brow.

“Fathead,” you say, “it's time to take the lead.”

I plunder on with strength I know not how,

through jungles thick and now it’s getting late.

Entwining growth, entangled I can’t move.

Cannibals scream and Jaguars loom above.

Are we a team? I’ve nothing left to prove.

I fight to breathe and then I feel a shove.

You grab my hand and pull me from the mire.

You draw me close, lifting me ever higher.

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About the Creator

John McFaul

I dont think of myself as a writer. I can barely spell. But I found this contest to be fun, so here goes.

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