Netflix & Toots
A Senryu
Squeezing to hold back,
but it exudes from the crack—
Quiet and deadly.
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She looked at her son. He was a man now really. Moments came when she saw glimpses of the boy he once was but rarely and they were snatched by her when he didn't know that he was being scrutinised by someone trying to make sense of who this person was, what he would become.
By Rachel Deeming5 days ago in Fiction
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I don't understand. That's never happened to me. Yeah, right! Great entry, RP!
Excellent
You understood the assignment. 🤣 This is so perfect for the challenge. Congrats! 🥂💕
Bodily functions. The inescapable truth and content for endless writings. *In my best Yoda voice*: Pungent this one is. Top Story well-deserved...hmm.
Hahahaha! Such a good one!
I love netflix
Get out of town! This is equal parts brilliant and hilarious.
Tops! Congrats RP! 🤣🎉
There ya go. Congrats on the TS.
I'm back to say congratulations on your Top Story!
Omg, i can’t believe this is top story! 🤣 Hilarious senryu and congrats! I am still giggling!
I can sense the heat from here.
Lol, definitely the essence of an awkward moment. Congrats on Top Story!
HA! well-earned top story. congrats!
Hahah!! OMG!! This was great RP!! Brought a smile to my face!! I love it!! You have such a talent for expressing yourself with so few words!! Brilliant and congratulations on Top Story!!
TS 🏅! Something smells odd about this one... 🤔
Hey. Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉✌️
I love that this made Top Story!!!!!!!
Back with super congrats 🤍
Congratulations on achieving top story status! 🥰
Ha! 💖 it!
Laughed out loud "What?" from coworkers. Vocal!
Omg hilarious!! I am cackling 🤣
Good one!
Haha. Love the rhyme.