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Breathe in and let go.
Feel the exhale escaping
through your nose and mouth.
Allow thoughts to pass.
Focus on the puffs of air.
The sound of the wind.
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Comments (12)
Great
A great daily exercise. 🙏 Exhale the old thoughts. Breathe in inspiration and renewal.
love it! ❤️
This felt like a momentary meditation! Nice!
I love your inspirational haikus, they feel natural 💕
Really well done and freeing!
This felt so liberating! Beautiful Haikus!
This is very soothing. Nicely done.
Nice and relaxing!
loved it.
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We can never be reminded too many times! Thank you 🤍🕊️✨🙏