Natural Sensation
This is for the Vocal "Sensational" poetry challenge
This is for the Vocal "Sensational" poetry challenge
The prompt is:
Write a poem inspired by the five senses.
I have decided to just use five quatrains, one for each sense, so it is sort of a nature sonnet but not. I don't know if this is a defined poetic format, but it is a poem with rhymes and six syllables per line (if I can count correctly).
Music is "New Sensation" by INXS
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To See The Sun Rising
The Colours In The Sky
Shades As You Walk Along
Trees And Flowers Nearby
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To Smell The Sweet Fragrance
Of Flowers In Meadows
That Makes Your Senses Dance
And Sets Your Heart Aglow
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To Taste The Sweetest Wine
That Excites The Tastebuds
As It Flows O'er Your Tongue
Such Tasteful Sweetness Floods
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To Hear The Dawn Chorus
And The Voice Of A Love
Sweet Birdsong To Soothe Us
In The Green Trees Above
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To Touch The One You Love
And Hold Them Ever Close
To Hold Them, And Still Blush
Know You Love Them The Most
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This is gorgeous, Mike. Very well done, indeed.
I loved feeling and appreciating each of the senses in these lovely stanzas. My favorite line was 'to hold them, and still blush'. Aww!!!
Beautiful! Such a graceful flow through the senses :)
So sweet and lovely!
Tender to the senses Each one represented Lower your defenses Nothing there resented.
Love the flow of this poem! Lovely!
Very nice.