My heart is on a sinking ship
I'm not sure I like writing poetry. Thanks Linda Ronstadt for some inspiration
They say home is where the heart is
And if that’s to believed
Then I’m homeless now, and I have been
Since the day I watched you leave
I had given you my heart
that once upon our time
And I desperately held on to yours
I guess love can make you blind
When we met, I thought I knew
That our fates were meant to cross
And our paths converged with commonness
My loneliness was lost
Perhaps we were too different
We should have seen it at the start
I still wonder how I captured
Such a wild and beautiful heart
Then came the day you told me
what you wanted for your life
Who am I told hold you back?
Even if you are my wife
Now when sleep comes, I dream of us
Of things that used to be
Of the future I had planned for us
One I thought was guaranteed
Then it changes to a hurricane
With wind and rain and fury
I am on a boat and struggling
The elements, my judge and jury
I wonder, should I have let you go
Did I even have a choice?
Oh what I wouldn’t give to hear
Your wise and steady voice
Then the dream is coming to an end
I see you standing on the shore
You no longer hold my heart
While I still cling to yours
The image fades, the sun comes up
Time to face another day
The terrifying tedium
Of the boring working day
But I see the papers lying there
Weighed down heavy with my pen
A simple scribbled signature
To bring us to an end
And now looking back to how we were
As I sit here in dismay
I knew I couldn’t go with you
And I couldn’t make you stay
There is nothing more that I can do
Time to move on with my life
I smile just knowing for a while
That you were once my wife
About the Creator
Phil Flannery
Damn it, I'm 61 now, which means I'm into my fourth year on Vocal, I have an interesting collection of stories. I love the Challenges and enter, when I can, but this has become a lovely hobby.
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Comments (11)
I think you just broke my heart. "I still wonder how I captured Such a wild and beautiful heart Then came the day you told me what you wanted for your life Who am I told hold you back? Even if you are my wife" So well composed, Phil, and so so sad. Your every word brings such pain and honesty, that I really don't think I can add much more, except to say that I'm terribly sorry if this is a true account, and I think you captured it so poignantly.
Very heartfelt and raw with emotion ❤️ Loved this line " The elements my judge and jury."
Found this on Deep Cuts, can see why Paul picked it. It’s beautiful
I enjoyed rereading this today, Phil. I've been there twice, for different reasons, and you've done a great job of expressing the sense of loss.
We never got married (or divorced), but I feel this one deeply, Phil.
Oh my. So sad, yet beautifully written.
Oh my goodness this is so good but so sad. 🩷 I could feel the heartbreak in every line.
This is heartbreaking, Phil, but expressed so well. Well done!
Heartbreaking!!! 💖💕
Very well expressed.
Nice words, thank you for sharing