My Go To Happy Place
Poem
The trees dance gently in the breeze,
their leaves are softly whispering,
Are they trying to talk to me?
Perhaps I should be listening.
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The kiss from the sun relaxes me,
my worries have disappeared.
I float to a place in another land,
to a world which holds no fear.
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I smell the scent of blossom,
my senses become aroused.
I take in the sounds of nature,
there are bird songs all around.
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Beneath, the long grass hugs me,
I accept its soft embrace.
I close my eyes and feel so safe,
in my go to happy place.
THE END
About the Creator
Hazel Rymell
..Suddenly I crash back down to earth with a big almighty bump!
...when not in a dolly daydream, creative me is at home in the UK doing the normal everyday mundane jobs, that seem to go on forever...until the daydreaming kicks in again...
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Comments (16)
A world that holds no fear WHEW if only
Well now. This was great. You put me right there in the scene with your exquisite words, Hazel. Well done on Top Story and a beautiful poem!
Nature poetry is the best. Well done and congrats!!!
Beautifully written!
Wow, Amazing Piece 📝😉❤️Congratulations on Your Top Story🎉💖🦋😊🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Very Descriptive! I enjoyed reading this!
omg!!! LOVE IT!!! I always felt that by the water. When I'd get down for any reason, I'd drive to the nearby lake and just sit and stare at the water. Now, being much older, my husband and I have a canal out back. Yet, I still find myself driving to the nearby park to just sit and stare at the water in the harbor. For some reason, it calms me. Your poem, in my opinion, is a masterpiece.
This is great. I'm glad you got top story for this, definitely deserved. Well done. I was there with you under the trees listening to the birds. It's a wonderful happy place.
Beautifully written. Congratulations on the well-deserved Top Story!
Congrats on the Top Story.
Wonderfully said, I felt the peace in your words. Congrats on the Top Story. You have a new subscriber.
Beautiful piece. Well done.
Beautiful poem! You wrote my perfect day:) Congrats in Top story!
Nice work Hazel! 👏I love watching the trees. A Very good mindful activity! 😊
This is awesome!!! Love your nature poem!!!
This was so relaxing! Very beautifully written!