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My Blue Eyes

Heartbroken Haiku

By Lightning BoltPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Broken engagement

Romantic tales left untold

Disconsolate souls

heartbreaksad poetry
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Lightning Bolt

From out of the blue, _Bolt writes horror galore, Sci-Fi, Superheroes & strange Poetry + MEME-ing MADNESS X12.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Demetrious Kelleyabout a year ago

    😭😭😭

  • Alex H Mittelman about a year ago

    Sad but good writing!

  • I'm so sorry, Bill!

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  • Emily Marie Concannonabout a year ago

    Aww Bill I'm so sorry 💚

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    So sorry!!! Heartbreaking!!! Powerfully painful!!!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Full of empathy. Good work.

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    I hate that I get this, but love that you shared it

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Sad but beautiful

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Excellent! I feel the depth 🥰

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