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MOTHER'S SENSES

Remembering Mom

By Babs IversonPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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October 2015, Mom's Birthday picture by Aunt J. Haines.

Remembering,

the smell and the scent of Evening In Paris that was on top of the dresser in a cobalt blue bottle.

Remembering,

a cool hand's touch on a hot forehead knowing all would soon be better.

Remembering,

arriving home from school, there were fresh baked bread and cinnamon rolls. The snack and the taste of butter on warm bread were comforting.

Remembering,

we see the dark storm clouds rolling and moving our way retrieving laundry from the clothesline and while out of breath, bringing in clothes.

Remembering,

straining to hear us, ears impaired praying that hearing would be restored.

Remembering mom.

Writer's notes: In honor of Mother's Day, May 14th, 2023, wish that I could give this poem to my mom. In December 2015, she went to heaven.

This poem is submitted to the Sensational Challenge. "The Prompt

Write a poem inspired by the five senses.

The five senses - sight, hearing, touch, taste, and smell - are not only the key ways in which we interact with the world around us, but also the key ingredients to crafting a sensory poem that can transport the reader to another place and time.

Through a sensory poem, a poet can evoke emotions, memories, and experiences by using descriptive and emotive language that engages the reader's senses. A sunset can be described through the use of vivid colors and striking imagery to capture the reader's sense of sight. The aroma of freshly baked bread can be depicted through the use of sensory language to activate the reader's sense of smell. A cool breeze can be described through language that evokes the reader's sense of touch."

Thank you for reading. You are always appreciated!

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About the Creator

Babs Iverson

Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.

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  • Clyde E. Dawkins12 months ago

    Such a beautiful, BEAUTIFUL poem!

  • Novel Allen12 months ago

    Mom definitely read the poem. Loved ones are always closer than you think. This is so beautiful.

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    πŸ’– lovely

  • A lovely tribute, thank you for sharing

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Thanks for sharing. A lovely tribute to your mom and the simple things in life which we must not forget. 😊✨

  • Awww, this was so emotional and touching! Very wonderfully written!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Beautiful, heartwarming memories and tribute to your dearest mom πŸ₯°πŸ’

  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a year ago

    Everybody needs a mama that bakes fresh bread. ❀

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    gorgeous tribute! Thx 4 sharing!!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Simply beautiful, you're mum would be proud! so eloquent and seemingly simple! well done, Babs

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Awww! So sentimental. Great job, Babs.

  • To all those who are missing our mothers, let us remember.

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    So beautiful ❀️❀️❀️

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Sweet sweet memory Babs ! πŸ₯°πŸ’œ

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem for your Mom. Well done, my friend.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    This brought tears to my eyes. What lovely memories to pen in tribute to your wonderful mom. Beautiful piece :)

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