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Mother

An eternal source of comfort

By Dawn SaloisPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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There’s a sparkle in her eyes in the morning

And laughter that escapes without warning

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Her aura always radiates power

She will come running, regardless of the hour

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Her strong, soothing hand on her child’s back

Unshakeable determination to fend off any attack

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Determined refusal to surrender to pressure

Absolute certainty that she knows better

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She has sacrificed her own comfort

But wouldn’t hesitate to, once again, put forth the effort

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She knows her child is capable and strong

But she also knows when something is wrong

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She has never hidden the truth, even when it wasn’t easy

Now she knows her offspring understands the value of honesty

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She has given comfort at every age

But she also knows when it’s time to turn the page

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She knows that she has succeeded in her chore

When her child needs her no more

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But she will always be there just in case

With a kind word and patient smile on her face

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Author’s note: This poem is based on my own experiences with motherhood. Everyone should have the experience of being loved unconditionally. Even if that experience is provided by someone other than a mother.

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About the Creator

Dawn Salois

Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.

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  • C. Rommial Butler2 years ago

    The author's note is as lovely as the poem.

  • What a wonderful tribute to motherhood Dawn. Beautifully done.

  • Love this, great words and a perfect image that you made

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Superb!!! Love ❤

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Just beautiful. Well done.

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