Moments
An M Tautogram
Moments meander mindfully
Moments manipulate maniacally
Moments move memorably
Moments memorialize monumentally
Miraculous, mirthful, magnificent, majestic, marvelous, magical moments
Maladjusted, maddening, malicious, mythical, meaningful, motivational moments
Mournful, merciful, meditative, moral, mellow, mindful moments
Moments measuring murmurs
Moments memorializing millennia
Moments mocking mortality
Moments matter
About the Creator
Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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TICK TOCK
11.59. Even though the glass had shattered, Lorna could still see that her watch ticked over. One minute until midnight. Her watch was the only thing she had that she could carry. The only thing to remember her parents by. A birthday present from last year, the year she turned seventeen.
By Elizabeth Butler4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (56)
I admire how you manage to make shape-poems out of your tautograms. It helps to pull the reader along through your ideas- clever!
Doperiffic
Well written
"Mahalo" (Hawaiian for "thank you"...and another "M", ha!) Your poem is amazing and inspiring!
This poem is a creative masterpiece. The use of M tautogram to explore different aspects of moments is simply brilliant. It is amazing how the writer was able to capture both positive and negative moments in such a concise yet powerful way. The contrast between the mirthful and malicious moments is striking, and it gives the poem a sense of balance. The imagery is vivid, and the words are carefully chosen to convey the different emotions that moments can evoke. Overall, it is an excellent piece that captures the essence of moments in a unique and creative way.
This is totally awesome.
Masterful ✨
That was awesome 👏 If u wanna read mine and tell me hows it going it would be wonderful 🥺 https://vocal.media/motivation/motivation-1z4u200c5
nicely put :)
Congratulations on Top Story!
What an awesome subject for this challenge. Very effective...Congrats!
It's all about moments, isn't it? One moment after another. So simple, so beautiful. Well done, Cathy, and congrats on a well-deserved Top Story! I love this.
Powerful last line. Beautiful poetry as always Cathy and congratulations on your Top Story 🤗
“Moments matter” two simple words with a whole lot of meaning. Nice one, Cathy!
Lovely :)
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your poem highlights the power of moments, both good and bad, in shaping our memories and experiences. It reminds us to cherish and learn from every moment we encounter in life.
Very creative! The message is excellent as well!
"Moments mocking mortality" - love this line!
Congratulations on Top Story, Queen!!!
Congratulations 🎉 ✨💖🎉
Congratulations on your top story! Love this ❤️
Congratulations, this was a beautiful piece
Yay!! Congrats on Top Story!! 😍😍
So many moments here. Excellent!! Congratulations on top story!